I almost forgot about this post I have been so wrapped up in my two AP tests tomorrow, but anyway here goes for the rhetorical analysis on Hamlet’s famous soliliquoy. I have already done one of these analysis’ in Mr.Engholm’s class but I couldn’t find it because I have no idea where my old english binder is so I am going to try and recall everything I know.
1. Exigence — What needs doing at this point? In other words, what is compelling Hamlet to speak at this moment in the play?
2. Audience – The audience is comprised of people who can in some way act on this exigence. Who is Hamlet’s primary audience and how does that influence his choices? Who is Hamlet’s secondary audience and how does that influence his choices? [Hint: they are not on the stage]
3. purpose What is the purpose of Hamlet’s speech?
4. Appeals: Which appeal(s) does Hamlet use to convince and/or motivate his audience? Reference specific lines.
Ethos: Appeal to the character of the speaker
Pathos: Appeal to the emotions or interest of the audience
Logos: Appeal to logic
At the point that Hamlet begins to speak, he is speaking because he is confused. He doesn’t know whether living in his horrible life is better than dying. Also he doesn’t know if he should take revenge or not, but of course he doesn’t know he is HAMLET, he is so indecisive. Therefore he begins to vent in his emotions and speaks out in this emotional soliliquoy. I believe that Hamlet’s main audience is himself because he is in such a big struggles with his mind and actions that he doesn’t know what to do. He can’t figure out if dying is better than livving, or if he should kill claudius or not. And then I think his secondary audience is his father, King Hamlet, because he is trying to explain what he is going through and explain why he hasn’t killed claudius. He telling his father why he hasn’t been able to take any action. I think that Hamlet is able to appeal to the audience and show them his characteristics by saying the line,”Whether ’tis nobler in the mind to suffer
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune,Or to take arms against a sea of troubles” This line lets the audience know what kind of person Hamlet is by letting them know what kind of problems he has. He is obviously a little crazy because he is debating whether life is better than death. So the audience gets a feel for his emotions during his outpour of feelings. In his speech he appeals to logic by saying, “For who would bear the whips and scorns of time” He is asking who could stand a life of torture and pain. Which gives him some good base for the side of death, and he tries to show that his life is so full of suffering that death probably couldn’t be any worse.
5. Figures of speech, imagery, diction, syntax: What literary devices does Hamlet employ? Where do you see him making comparisons? Which tropes–similes, metaphors, personification, hyperbole, etc. does he use? How do these comparisons relate to his rhetorical purpose? What particularly vivid images stand out? What effect do these images have on Hamlet’s rhetorical purpose?
Hamlet uses a lot of imagery to create a feeling of overall sadness and confusion. He talks about sleep and how it is so mysterious because if he decides to kill himself and got to eternal sleep he can never return and he doesn’t know what that eternal sleep has in store. He is scared of the possibilty of death but also can’t live with his “sea of troubles”, which is his painful life. He also references to Claudius and King Hamlet by saying, “Th’oppressor’s wrong, the proud man’s contumely” Claudius being the oppressor and King Hamlet being the proud man. The image that most stands out is the image of Hamlet’s eternal sleep and the darkness of death. However Hamlet is too much of a baby to do anything so its hard to believe he is going to take any action at all, he probably will just sit and see how things play out. And keep his mouth shut forever…. but I know what happens hehehe.
6. How do you respond to Hamlet’s soliloquy? In other words, what do you think of him right now?
After reading this soliliquoy I think of Hamlet as a man on ther edge of a serious breakdown. However I do not feel much pity for him because he is not man enough to step up. Yes his uncle killed his father, but he wouldn’t be in this situation if he would just do what needs to be done. So although he is really emotional, and sad at this point, if I was living during his time I’d give Hamlet a nice punch in the face and say, ” MAN UP!”